19 April 2010

Microfiction Monday #27


The sirens waited in vain for ships, playing sea songs and singing.
They sunk no ships, but made a model boat run aground. No sailors died.

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9 comments:

Anonymous said...

Excellent take on the photo my friend. I like the part about the model boat. Well done. Have a wonderful week ahead :)

Peggy said...

Hey a model boat is a good start for these vixens. First i thought it was going to be serious and then I had a LOL at the end.
Nice one!

jabblog said...

Aww, shame . . . but innocent fun!

anthonynorth said...

That was fun. Enjoyed it.

Susan at Stony River said...

Good for them -- at least it's a start, isn't it? LOL Today model boats, tomorrow the Irish Navy!

I loved this!

Sylvia K said...

LOL! Yep, model boat is a good place to start!!
Great one for the day!! Have a great week!

Sylvia

SouthLakesMom said...

I wonder if the pond at their feet is really our whole ocean, and their toes stir the storms...very well done to evoke imagination by reader!

Unknown said...

Now, THAT is pure genius. Model ship?
Excellent MM!
Have you a great week!
Mine is here
hugs
shakira

John (@bookdreamer) said...

You have to practise to make perfect! I'm still on the lyrical theme. My micro-fiction