19 April 2010

Microfiction Monday #27


The sirens waited in vain for ships, playing sea songs and singing.
They sunk no ships, but made a model boat run aground. No sailors died.

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9 comments:

Thom said...

Excellent take on the photo my friend. I like the part about the model boat. Well done. Have a wonderful week ahead :)

Peggy said...

Hey a model boat is a good start for these vixens. First i thought it was going to be serious and then I had a LOL at the end.
Nice one!

jabblog said...

Aww, shame . . . but innocent fun!

anthonynorth said...

That was fun. Enjoyed it.

Susan at Stony River said...

Good for them -- at least it's a start, isn't it? LOL Today model boats, tomorrow the Irish Navy!

I loved this!

Sylvia K said...

LOL! Yep, model boat is a good place to start!!
Great one for the day!! Have a great week!

Sylvia

SouthLakesMom said...

I wonder if the pond at their feet is really our whole ocean, and their toes stir the storms...very well done to evoke imagination by reader!

Sh@KiR@ CK said...

Now, THAT is pure genius. Model ship?
Excellent MM!
Have you a great week!
Mine is here
hugs
shakira

John's comments said...

You have to practise to make perfect! I'm still on the lyrical theme. My micro-fiction