02 April 2010

Flash Fiction Friday in 55

He sheds all his clothes in the patio to surprise her.
She ducks behind the sofa with the rest of the guests waiting to shout "Surprise! Happy Anniversary!"
He sneaks into the hallway.
They take a collective breath.
He strides into the sitting room as they jump up.
He remembers why he hates surprise parties.

6 comments:

Hootin' Anni said...

ROFLMAO!!!!!

Mine is posted HERE. As always, scroll down below my Friday Show n Tell to find my 55.

Have a great holiday weekend.

Brian Miller said...

haha. sounds like something that would happen to me...tee hee. fun 55.

my 55 is up!

G-Man said...

It definately was a surprise!!!
Excellent 55 Aoife.
Thank You so much for contributing today, You Rock!
Have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

John's comments said...

Quick reach for the Easter eggs - the big ones..Mine is here

GM said...

hilarious - i hope i'm never caught in this moment, on either side!

here is my 55 in case you'd like to read.

Buzzard said...

It's one thing to have party favors, it's quite another to be the party favor.