09 August 2010

Microfiction Monday #43


The images jostled for preponderance in the letter-outlines, but she saw only the simple bridge where she had said yes to his diamond ring.

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15 comments:

MorningAJ said...

Oh. Romantic!
That's really great.

Ellie said...

A captivating microfiction. Beautifully written.

erik said...

Aww, how sweet.

swputh said...

'she saw only the simple bridge'
This made me notice that bridge in there... I had already spent some time on this picture... still failed to notice that evident feature.
A challenge to my observation skill...
Beautiful

John's comments said...

But would she had yes to anything cheaper...you know what some dames are like. Gone for SF adventure today. My 140 is here

SouthLakesMom said...

What Erik said...awwww, how sweet! That would be one postcard to keep on the fridge!

Nessa said...

That is so sweet and romantic.

ninotaziz said...

This is the sweetest MFM today...lovely!

Pat said...

Oh, I love it! I hadn't even noticed (i.e.,paid much attention to) the bridge until I read your story. Sweet and sentimental.

Jingle said...

a whole story in fewer than 140 characters. perfect job.

Mama Badger said...

Wait, this isn't the guy who dropped the ring on the bridge, is it? She said yes, but did she get to wear it? Great take.

Sylvia Morice said...

Great job on the drawing. Very romantic and sweet. Let's hope they live "happily ever after..."

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Mama Zen said...

How romantic! I love this one!

Susan at Stony River said...

Aw, that was sweet!

septembermom said...

So lovely!