screaming in silence,
skin flayed from bone
raw meat beneath,
but red-blooded
severed limbs die
with no blood supply
tips of digits turning
ivory and rubbery
vinegar-preserved hands
bleed inside glass
scratching at the orb
round and round
calling for lightning,
thunder,
to free them.
But they are captive
in a bubble of time
a single bubble
that caught them and a fish
in death as they rose,
hands open for freedom
wishing but captive,
hands and a fish.
15 comments:
I don't really know why I liked this one..but I did....eerie!!
I guess I loved the thought of captive in a bubble of time....oh the agony
Wow! That was intense .. in a good way!
A terrific read!
Powerful intense poem -- love it,
Joanny
...digits turning ivory and rubbery
Ooo, deliciously raw!
Yeah. I was sith the hands image too. I didn't use it but you have beautifully.
oh this magpie smacks of mythology to me...like a hero or villain trapped for all time until some unsuspecting person releases them...very nicely done!
Great descriptive writing, Aoife!
Powerful.
sharp and you got me in your tale!
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mine is up,
I appreciate your time reading it.
Best!
so vivid that I got a little bit of the heebie jeebies. great use of language!
wow! pretty intense but your words describe the trauma perfectly! this was a fantastic and creative read, thanks for posting!
I like this imagery!
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