Beware lest they charm you into the hill
and concoct a robust feast from your bones
and gnaw and chew, enjoying the kill
Yes, beware, beware of the hill
Excellent choice of theme. I love the standing stone photo. I looked and saw "shonebirran stone circle" so I googled it looking for info. There was no reference to it on the internet. Where is it?
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That does look like teeth sticking up.
Excellent choice of theme. I love the standing stone photo. I looked and saw "shonebirran stone circle" so I googled it looking for info. There was no reference to it on the internet. Where is it?
Oddly chilling for such a short piece. Nicely done.
This is a good story for Halloween.
I love the rhythm of this. Sounds like something that has been repeated through generations. Great use of the picture, too!
" ... and grind his bones for my bread." Really very, very good. Brilliant.
This is too good..
commas in the pauses
This is really good. I like it; good rhythm.
Really like the mystery and foreboding in this piece; picture that accompanies adds to it. Nice!
OMG Now you have gone and scared me too! :D Good one
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