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09 August 2010

Microfiction Monday #43


The images jostled for preponderance in the letter-outlines, but she saw only the simple bridge where she had said yes to his diamond ring.

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15 comments:

  1. MorningAJ9 August 2010 at 07:25

    Oh. Romantic!
    That's really great.

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  2. Ellie Garratt9 August 2010 at 07:50

    A captivating microfiction. Beautifully written.

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  3. erik9 August 2010 at 08:22

    Aww, how sweet.

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  4. swputh9 August 2010 at 09:39

    'she saw only the simple bridge'
    This made me notice that bridge in there... I had already spent some time on this picture... still failed to notice that evident feature.
    A challenge to my observation skill...
    Beautiful

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  5. John (@bookdreamer)9 August 2010 at 10:16

    But would she had yes to anything cheaper...you know what some dames are like. Gone for SF adventure today. My 140 is here

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  6. SouthLakesMom9 August 2010 at 12:51

    What Erik said...awwww, how sweet! That would be one postcard to keep on the fridge!

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  7. Nessa9 August 2010 at 16:42

    That is so sweet and romantic.

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  8. ninotaziz9 August 2010 at 17:55

    This is the sweetest MFM today...lovely!

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  9. Pat9 August 2010 at 18:20

    Oh, I love it! I hadn't even noticed (i.e.,paid much attention to) the bridge until I read your story. Sweet and sentimental.

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  10. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall9 August 2010 at 18:34

    a whole story in fewer than 140 characters. perfect job.

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  11. Mama Badger9 August 2010 at 19:32

    Wait, this isn't the guy who dropped the ring on the bridge, is it? She said yes, but did she get to wear it? Great take.

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  12. Sylvia Morice9 August 2010 at 21:00

    Great job on the drawing. Very romantic and sweet. Let's hope they live "happily ever after..."

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  13. Maude Lynn9 August 2010 at 22:51

    How romantic! I love this one!

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  14. Susan at Stony River10 August 2010 at 03:03

    Aw, that was sweet!

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  15. septembermom10 August 2010 at 03:27

    So lovely!

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