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19 April 2010

Microfiction Monday #27


The sirens waited in vain for ships, playing sea songs and singing.
They sunk no ships, but made a model boat run aground. No sailors died.

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9 comments:

  1. Anonymous19 April 2010 at 19:31

    Excellent take on the photo my friend. I like the part about the model boat. Well done. Have a wonderful week ahead :)

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  2. Peggy19 April 2010 at 20:41

    Hey a model boat is a good start for these vixens. First i thought it was going to be serious and then I had a LOL at the end.
    Nice one!

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  3. jabblog19 April 2010 at 21:19

    Aww, shame . . . but innocent fun!

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  4. anthonynorth19 April 2010 at 22:06

    That was fun. Enjoyed it.

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  5. Susan at Stony River19 April 2010 at 22:47

    Good for them -- at least it's a start, isn't it? LOL Today model boats, tomorrow the Irish Navy!

    I loved this!

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  6. Sylvia K19 April 2010 at 23:44

    LOL! Yep, model boat is a good place to start!!
    Great one for the day!! Have a great week!

    Sylvia

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  7. SouthLakesMom20 April 2010 at 00:37

    I wonder if the pond at their feet is really our whole ocean, and their toes stir the storms...very well done to evoke imagination by reader!

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  8. Unknown20 April 2010 at 08:36

    Now, THAT is pure genius. Model ship?
    Excellent MM!
    Have you a great week!
    Mine is here
    hugs
    shakira

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  9. John (@bookdreamer)20 April 2010 at 11:11

    You have to practise to make perfect! I'm still on the lyrical theme. My micro-fiction

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