tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-633638405280169328.post8112719281717623538..comments2023-11-08T14:58:11.739+00:00Comments on The Tales of Two Writers: KiteAoife.Troxelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08557613486797904602noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-633638405280169328.post-38918772900834213782010-08-06T05:03:39.051+01:002010-08-06T05:03:39.051+01:00Lovely! I could immediately 'see' the kite...Lovely! I could immediately 'see' the kites strung together, with one dragging the others down more often than not.~willow~http://noweepingallowed.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-633638405280169328.post-81793862809852557882010-08-06T01:16:07.609+01:002010-08-06T01:16:07.609+01:00Sometimes, the required words stick out like a sor...Sometimes, the required words stick out like a sore thumb. But here, the words seemed organic to the piece, if that makes sense (I don't always make sense, sorry!). Very nice, great imagery, and unique take on the prompt.R.S. Bohnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09101260459422806220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-633638405280169328.post-51823108912160766602010-08-05T16:52:01.756+01:002010-08-05T16:52:01.756+01:00I like how it rlates to myth!
now it is there, no...I like how it rlates to myth!<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2010/08/now-it-there-no-it-isnt.html" rel="nofollow">now it is there, now it isn't</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-633638405280169328.post-59377245309825439192010-08-05T13:46:24.872+01:002010-08-05T13:46:24.872+01:00Powerful piece. The descriptions and insight into...Powerful piece. The descriptions and insight into the myth is very well done. <br /><br />-TimTimothy P. Remphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04422296532550497806noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-633638405280169328.post-44975064241619620102010-08-04T16:02:05.941+01:002010-08-04T16:02:05.941+01:00writing from own experience does work.. gives a di...writing from own experience does work.. gives a different effect.. good one..!Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-633638405280169328.post-21840620091859706462010-08-04T14:32:00.903+01:002010-08-04T14:32:00.903+01:00really nice writing here, very descriptive and suc...really nice writing here, very descriptive and such a great idea for the narrative.Thom Gabrukiewiczhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-633638405280169328.post-29374998668387570642010-08-04T14:01:59.353+01:002010-08-04T14:01:59.353+01:00The three words melted into this poem seamlessly. ...The three words melted into this poem seamlessly. I like this poem and the subtle visualizations it evokes. Nicely done.Khttp://khalidah.blogspot.conoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-633638405280169328.post-89074987727839136312010-08-04T13:21:55.461+01:002010-08-04T13:21:55.461+01:00Very good how you managed to associate the three w...Very good how you managed to associate the three words with your own experience!I wanted a picture of your kites though!Rinkly Rimeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.com